Exemplo no 11. Exemplo de linguagem empolada e gongórica
Autor | José Fiker |
Ocupação do Autor | Doutor em Semiótica e Linguística Geral (com enfâse em Laudos Periciais) pela USP |
Páginas | 201-205 |
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Neste exemplo, desejamos mostrar o efeito contrário ao da linguagem informal e coloquial focalizada no exemplo no 9, no que diz respeito àquilo que dissemos no CAPÍTULO VIII – AUDITÓRIO – DISCURSO DIRECIONADO.
Neste caso, temos o extremo oposto: linguagem excessivamente rebuscada, que também acaba resvalando no ridículo pelo exagero que denota.
É verdade que se trata de um memorial escrito por advogados e que, portanto, espelha muito mais a linguagem do juiz do que a do perito.
Mas existem peritos que costumam adentrar esse terreno e nem sempre com muito sucesso.
É mais comum ao juiz, quando justifica sua sentença, utilizar-se de termos bombásticos e de efeito retórico retumbante.
A incursão do perito nesse campo pode provocar estranheza ao juiz e pode não ser bem recebida. Ainda mais se o perito não dominar, como em geral não domina, a linguagem gongórica, que, aliás, já caiu em desuso. Podem resultar aberrações que distorçam completamente a tese a ser provocada pelo experto.
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Não recomendamos a adoção desse expediente, do qual se aproxima oexemplodadonotextotiradodolivro Imbróglio Avaliatório, já citado.
Melhor que o perito se atenha à linguagem que domina, predominantemente realista, conforme vimos no trabalho, que é a mais adequada aos trabalhos técnicos, sem abdicar dos termos que conferem maior precisão ao discurso, mas não se esquecendo nunca de explicá-los ao juiz.
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PEÇA SUA AVALIAÇÃO- Linguagem do laudo pericial. Técnicas de comunicação e persuasão
- Exemplos
- Exemplo no 1. Modelo de laudo conforme esquema proposto no Capítulo 17 - Produção do discurso
- Exemplo no 2. Análise de laudo judicial
- Exemplo no 3. Análise de parecer técnico divergente em comparação com parecer técnico concordante
- Exemplo no 4. Uso da metáfora e da fotografia para ilustrar descabimento no emprego de determinado método de avaliação
- Exemplo no 5. Exemplo de laudo fartamente ilustrado e com explicações didáticas sobre o método de avaliação
- Exemplo no 6. Exemplo de laudo judicial, cuja redação confusa conduziu o juiz a erro
- Exemplo no 7. Exemplo de um parecer técnico que inclui na indenização perda de vagas de garagem em estabelecimento industrial/comercial
- Exemplo no 8. Exemplo de parecer técnico que critica o laudo judicial em todos os aspectos objetivos, sem entrar em pontos polêmicos e sem se preocupar com a defesa deste ou daquele valor mais alto ou mais baixo
- Exemplo no 9. Exemplo de laudo pericial com linguagem coloquial, não técnica, digressivo com falta de objetividade e total desconhecimento da linguagem forense
- Exemplo no 10. O uso de metáforas na linguagem de construção civil
- Exemplo no 11. Exemplo de linguagem empolada e gongórica
- Conclusão
- Bibliografia
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